Without an original text provided, I'll demonstrate using an example text: Original: "John loves to swim. Since a young age, he's enjoyed the feel of water and the thrill of competition. His dream is to compete in the Olympics one day." Extended: "Growing up, John discovered his deep love for swimming. From a tender young age, he always felt an irresistible pull towards water; he felt comfort, freedom, and an odd sense of belonging whenever he dived in. Be it in a quiet, chlorinated pool, or amidst the waves crashing on the beach, swimming was his true passion. Not only was it the sensory pleasure of water against his skin that excited him, but also the sheer thrill of competition that swimming brought with it. Over the years, this love for swimming has shaped one of his biggest dreams - to participate in the grand stage of the Olympics. He aspires not just to be a part of it, but to compete amongst the world's best swimmers. An Olympic medal shining around his neck is what he dreams of every single day."